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you never disapoint :3

i love the the design. i can tell the character has history :3 well done.
the only thing i'd improve would be the pose, but depending on the medium this might be irrelevant, so you get a 9.5/10 from the person you should care far less about than anyone else: me! XD
keep up the great work, friend!

Neutronboar responds:

Thank you for honest and constructive criticism.These type of comments I care about the most! Yeah good point, the pose could of been better.

im going to point out a few things but first i'd like to say this:
im rather brutal and blunt when i review things. if there's something to say, i say it and i might come off as a dick. sorry if i do.
truth is there's talent here. you know how to create the feel of dread and the unease in the painting. but, like every artist (me included), you have some weak spots.
for one, the character's cloak. it looks good at first, but there needs to be more texture to it. i'd advise the use of pictures as references and making the coat fold and wave more.
the second issue is the blood. you used those brushes quite well in some parts, like the bottom right: you made a splat and deformed the image to fit it. but then you use it on the coat and it goes south... it's 2 dimentional and has no history behind it. to fix this problem (one i had a few years ago)
i'd urge you to draw your own blood and make it more liquid, dripping from the blade and make it follow the depth of the coat.
lastly, the background. i get it is not the focus, but those doors look copy-pasted on the wall. for this i'd advise the use of references again.

now for the things i really like:
the character looks cool. it looks innocent but the green eyes are a bit unatural.
the sword looks simple and this adds to the creepy factor. the fact that only the blade is visible adds to this.
the lantern. that light is well done and very well placed, illuminating the face of the character and obscuring the rest.

that's my long-ass review. hope i didnt cut too deep ^^" remember to practice and those issues i mentioned wont plague you anymore. keep up the good work and even better animation.
cheers

love the detail on the hair :D the cartoon/realistic style really fits the character and i can really picture a backstory for him. in my limited experience that's good, so keep it up!!!

if fallout had a sweaty, nasty night with skyrim, this is the baby they'd make. XD well done, the bitch looks like a fucking badass

holy damn XD this is amazing! well done, my friend. keep it up

if i had anything i'd bitch about, it would be the background, but the focus is on something so complex i doubt you could have picked a more developed BG without making the image to saturated, so i'd say this is borderline perfect!

the faces XD so epic

i always get really pumped when i see you posting something new. being an artist myself, i learn quite a bit from your work. this, however, hits a few petpeeves of mine. namely the lack of texture on the axe handle, cape and background. it's still great and i couldn't do better by any stretch of the imagination, but there's always room for improvment and, looking at your work collectively, i belive this is a tiny flaw you can easely fix.
keep up the good work, my friend ;)

SurrealKatie responds:

Noted, Capes have always been an issue for me. As for the armour? can't really explain that one, it just came out as it came out.

really awesome :) love the colours! have you tried adding a sort of shadow to the edges of the BG? it usually works well in these types of drawings, (at least for me, though i dont upload on newgrounds much)

P-cate responds:

It's all about compositiooon, in this case, some focused comp into the face.

i get it's a bit hard to do with a six-armed gian, but it needs a more dynamic pose. other than that, it's pretty good! keep it up ;)

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