death13tamer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos follower]

ho-ly-fuck <3

[Halloween 2016]

i love everything about this, though the sky could be better <3

[Untitled 92]

the only fault i can find is the transition from the wrist to the right hand, and even that's not wrong. it just looks a bit weird XD well done. another great painting.

[Bishop]

*o* epic

[Rogue]

non constructive comment: looks cool :D

constructive comment: i like the effects on the leather and the figure of the character is spot on. the 2 things i'd redo (or at least work on) would be the eyes and the daggers. the eyes look a bit odd and make her look a bit crosseyed. the daggers look like toys x.x they dont look sharp at all, when in reallity you can and have done better.

all in all, it's really good and im glad to see you experimenting with other body types, but you can do much better. keep up the good work, my friend ;D

SurrealKatie responds:

It's almost like this was a flat colour image with a few simple shades here and there.

[Untitled 84]

it's so cute XD

on a side note, what do you use when making these? is it all digital or do you have some mixed process?

RobStanley responds:

Some are painted with real paint and some are digitally painted. This one is a digital one :)

[Untitled 80]

you never disapoint :3

[post apocalyptic soldier]

i love the the design. i can tell the character has history :3 well done.
the only thing i'd improve would be the pose, but depending on the medium this might be irrelevant, so you get a 9.5/10 from the person you should care far less about than anyone else: me! XD
keep up the great work, friend!

Neutronboar responds:

Thank you for honest and constructive criticism.These type of comments I care about the most! Yeah good point, the pose could of been better.

[The Halls of A.E.]

im going to point out a few things but first i'd like to say this:
im rather brutal and blunt when i review things. if there's something to say, i say it and i might come off as a dick. sorry if i do.
truth is there's talent here. you know how to create the feel of dread and the unease in the painting. but, like every artist (me included), you have some weak spots.
for one, the character's cloak. it looks good at first, but there needs to be more texture to it. i'd advise the use of pictures as references and making the coat fold and wave more.
the second issue is the blood. you used those brushes quite well in some parts, like the bottom right: you made a splat and deformed the image to fit it. but then you use it on the coat and it goes south... it's 2 dimentional and has no history behind it. to fix this problem (one i had a few years ago)
i'd urge you to draw your own blood and make it more liquid, dripping from the blade and make it follow the depth of the coat.
lastly, the background. i get it is not the focus, but those doors look copy-pasted on the wall. for this i'd advise the use of references again.

now for the things i really like:
the character looks cool. it looks innocent but the green eyes are a bit unatural.
the sword looks simple and this adds to the creepy factor. the fact that only the blade is visible adds to this.
the lantern. that light is well done and very well placed, illuminating the face of the character and obscuring the rest.

that's my long-ass review. hope i didnt cut too deep ^^" remember to practice and those issues i mentioned wont plague you anymore. keep up the good work and even better animation.
cheers