death13tamer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wargreymon]

he looks like he's gonna fuck some shit up... i approve X) keep it up, my friend!

RadiBits responds:

He's tired of them Pokemans hogging all the glory >:U Thanks a bunch my dude!

[Jam Dance]

Really good. things to improve:
tit bounce- animate the bouncing with a bit of a delay. watch porn: it's a good reference and you won't get bored XD
motion- right now she's doing a "U" shape on her motion aka she's moving down then up and snapping back through the same path. try using an "8" shape aka move down then up, slow down and start moving left before the downward motion. same when moving to the right.
overall shape- when squatting (at the bottom of the "U") she should have a bit of a deformation, stretching to the sides and squishing vertically.

TLDR- DELAY. train making the base motion and then delaying everything on top of it :D

good luck, my man

JuicyDemon responds:

Thanks for the animation tips! I've come to the realization that I need to spend a lot longer on my animations.

But if I have to watch porn to improve, I'll bite the bullet and suffer through it ;)

[Untitled 121]

fuckin metal, dude \m/ keep up the good shit ;D

RobStanley responds:

Cheers mate

[Erotic Haunt - Ghost Girls Line Up - Comic Concept Commission]

what programs and tools do you use to make the line art? I use photoshop, but I've been told there are better programs for that. since I like how clean your line work is I'd love to learn a bit from you.

HugoTendaz responds:

I guess you can make clean lines in every software. It's just matter of experience with it and patience.

But Manga Studio makes things a lot easier. New version is called Clip Studio Paint. It has a lot more powerful tools for drawing than PS. I've seen even really nice digital painting made there, but it still has to catch up with PS in that area. But for line art is great, feels very natural. I also tried Krita, it's free and still very good with lines, but I'm used to MS and stick to it. And I heard many good things about Sai too.

Don't worry about line quality that much, things beneath are more important. Lines will come along as you draw more. Plus so many artist create great art with sketchy, wild and raw lines. So just keep that pencil busy till you find your style.

[1_tamer]

REALLYsolid artwork, friend :) try to add some wear and tear on the armor, since he seems like a fairly experienced fellow. i love the details on the armor and the fact that you didnt just draw a plain spear. the pet is a bit odd but cute. it works. i think the perspective on the eye slots on the mask is a bit off and the color seems a bit dull, but it might just be me.

all in all, 5 stars. it's a great work and an interesting design.
i would personally darken the shadows a tiny bit and lighten the colors too. if you wanna try it in a simple way and you use photoshop, you can just add a copy of that image on a layer above the rest of your work (merge the entire copy so you get a single layer) and then change the filter from "normal" to "Overlay" then mess around with the opacity.
keep it up, my friend. great things sprout from your noggin and im all too eager to see what comes next :)

DolTiSh responds:

Thanks for the nice input man

[mccree]

love the style. the outfit's a good pick. only one nitpick: the face is not exactly McCree. I believe McCree has more of an underbite and thinner lips, as well as a more rectangular face and a slightly bigger nose lower on his face. I might be wrong though, so please check before you take my advice to heart. regardless, it's still an awesome painting and I hope to get more from you in the future :) keep it up, friend. hope this comment helps.

meltyimp responds:

thanks for your thoughts!

[Satyr warrior]

this is awesome :D do you use custom brushes or do you stick with the normal ones?

ArtDeepMind responds:

Im using both :)

[Rogue]

non constructive comment: looks cool :D

constructive comment: i like the effects on the leather and the figure of the character is spot on. the 2 things i'd redo (or at least work on) would be the eyes and the daggers. the eyes look a bit odd and make her look a bit crosseyed. the daggers look like toys x.x they dont look sharp at all, when in reallity you can and have done better.

all in all, it's really good and im glad to see you experimenting with other body types, but you can do much better. keep up the good work, my friend ;D

SurrealKatie responds:

It's almost like this was a flat colour image with a few simple shades here and there.

[Untitled 84]

it's so cute XD

on a side note, what do you use when making these? is it all digital or do you have some mixed process?

RobStanley responds:

Some are painted with real paint and some are digitally painted. This one is a digital one :)

[post apocalyptic soldier]

i love the the design. i can tell the character has history :3 well done.
the only thing i'd improve would be the pose, but depending on the medium this might be irrelevant, so you get a 9.5/10 from the person you should care far less about than anyone else: me! XD
keep up the great work, friend!

Neutronboar responds:

Thank you for honest and constructive criticism.These type of comments I care about the most! Yeah good point, the pose could of been better.